WIP Character Builds

We understand making a great character build that others actually want to play is difficult. And while some are comfortable working on their build in private and releasing it when complete, others may desperately need a lot of guiddance along the way. Whats where this section comes in.

In this section you may post any half finished rough draft build your working if you're in need of guidance or just want a place for people to evaluate your work as you work on it. Here are some helpful guidelines to remember

-Ensure you include the term "WIP Build" to your title so it can be more readily distinguisable from completed character builds. Example - WIP Build: The Sneak Archer

-For those posting their WIPs here, please be open to constructive criticism. You wouldnt be posting your work here if you thought it was perfect to begin with, so please make an honest effort to take in criticism. 

-For those commenting, dont be an ass. It takes a bit of courage to share ones own creative ideas, so dont ruin it by trying to bring people down. Be mindful of how you critique. Focus on being constructive

-When your build is complete, feel free to move it yourself or let me or an admin know and we'll move it over to where the completed builds reside. 

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WIP Build: The Time Renderer

3433852040?profile=RESIZE_710x" Visions ... is the only thing that projects in my head. Blurred visions of the past and the future.

What do they mean? Are they some kind of fate?

It feels like i no longer own my thoughts. I need to go and try to decipher what they are, what's their purpose.

Will it be the end of this or just the beginning of something bigger? "

 

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BACKSTORY

 

Alenier was born in The Glowing Peninsula, a big island far north from Tamriel. An extraordinary place secluded and protected by it's people from the problems of the outer world. The habitants of this island have knowledge of some kind of light magic obtained from the land, an art taught by their ancestors, an art which purpose has always been to protect their land and themselves. But Alenier was just a child, he could only watch and learn from sight how the elders channelled and used the magic for the greater good.

3434181442?profile=RESIZE_710xUntil one day, thousand of ships were spotted near the coasts, and in their veils, The Thalmor's insignia. The Thalmor knew about this place from many years ago, knew they had an extremely important magic source and knew it was well protected. They took the time to study and design a plan to aboard and submit them, so they could extract their magic and their secrets. The Peninsula's habitants putted a great fight, but at last they were outnumbered by the Thalmor and many died by their hands. One Thalmor agent spotted Alenier, no matter if he was a child, the order was to annihilate any witness, the Thalmor agent started to charge his magic to end with the apparently unprotected child, but one second before the shot touched Alenier, an unknown mystical barrier surrounded and protected him by absorbing the shot, then making a potential explosion and throwing the Thalmor Agent in the air. As the peninsula burned in flames, this barrier stayed around Alenier, protecting him from anything. No one could ever explain what was it, it wasnt The Glowing Peninsula's magic, it was an unkown force.

3434187738?profile=RESIZE_710xYears passed and The Glowing Peninsula was rebuilded thanks to the few survivors from that attack, as Alenier growed up and although he was just a child when that tragedy happened, he couldnt never be the same. After that incident he felt some sort of power and knowledge growing inside of him as he started seeing visions which he thought were only dreams, but as the time passed, these visions became more and more common, showing him blurry images of the past and the future, usually about some magical and dangerous orb, mages, evil/good gods and goddesses, dragons, people of the past fighting them, dark times and also the end of the world. 

He decided to travel, explore and dedicate his days to search the meaning out of all these episodes he had been experimenting in his mind since the last few years, he wanted answers about those visions and see if there was any connection with the strange energy he felt through his veins.

Alenier had no idea that finding those answers would trascend him and become, The Timerenderer.

 

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CHARACTER

 

Race: Breton (Roleplay purpose. I choosed this race because the magic protection it gives and most important the spell absorption which is vital for this character)

Name: Alenier

Age: last age knowed was 23 years old

Stone: Atronach (Roleplay purpose. Thanks to the unknown magic that protects him from magic, more spell absorption, the better.)

Stats: 4/2/0

Major skills: Alteration, Destruction, Speech

Minor skills: Enchanting, Conjuration

Spells: Shoke, Flesh and time spells (soon to explain)

Shouts: Unrelenting Force, Slow Time, Become Ethereal

Mods: soon to come

Roleplay: soon to come

Moves: soon to come

 

 

to be continued...

 

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So, after many years playing Skyrim and having so much fun playing everyone elses builds (which ill keep enjoying playing) i decided to start my first build, hope you all like it when its done and of course im open to any ideas and improving critiques!

 

 

 

 

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  • Had a read over this man. I’m rather curious to find out more. Idea for the title, perhaps have it Time Renderer?

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