hi I'm rojer my second build so all feedback is incredibly appreciated but anyways I hope you enjoy the build thanks.
the insurgent grew up in the black marsh as part of a gorrila warfare group who would interrupt dark elvish slavers. He first killed a man when he was 11 years old. He was on the run after a failed slave camp raid in morrowind he narrowly escaped with his life but he managed to escape to the border of skyrim where he was caught in the aftermath of an imperial/stormcloak skirmish. And he's angry..........
WEIGHT: I prefer aesthetically the slider to the very minimum
STAT INVESTMENT: magika:0 health: 3
stamina:2
STANDING STONE: lord stone because you have no armor you need all the protection you can get
MAJOR/MINOR SKILLS
MAJOR:stealth. as a user of gorilla warfare it was a necessary skill to know.get backstab and go up the left side to silent role.
One handed:go up the right side for the dual wielding perks
Archery:overdraw,eagle eye,steady hand
Smithing:advanced armors perk to smith your weapons
EQUIPMENT: ARMOR fur bracers,ragged trousers and imperial boots
WEAPONS:Nordic sword and dagger or two Nordic swords and crossbow.
A brutal dark elven slaver whipping an argonian slave
QUESTS:CIVILWAR:STORM CLOAK ROLE PLAY THAT ULFRIC AGREED TO GIVING YOU TROOPS TO CONTINUE LIBERATING ARGONIANS FROM SLAVE CAMPS AFTER SKYRIM IS LEBERATED FROM THE IMPERIALS.
THIEVES GUILD:HELPFUL FOR IMPROVING STEALTH AND TO MAKE MONEY.DO LOTS OF HIESTS AND JOBS.
DAWNGAURD:SIDE WITH DAWNGAURD THE INSURGENT CARES MOSTLY ABOUT ARGONIANS AND VAMPIRES TAKING OVER THE WORLD ISNT GOOD FOR ARGONIANS.
GAMEPLAY:stealthily killing your targets and sneakily falling back into the shadows.the lack of high armor points is really fun to play with because you need to dispatch your enemy's quickly and quietly to avoid getting swarmed and being killed.
BACKSTORY:The insurgent was five years old when the dark elves came to his village and captured every person there and loaded them up into wagons.the insurgents father did his best to defend his family but he was overpowered by the dark elves but not before killing three soilders. During the wagon ride through black marsh a group of ARGONIANS jumped out of the trees with spears and bows and swiftly killed every guard and opened up the cages. The villagers were thanking the leader of the group when the young insurgent ran up to the leader of the group and started crying saying that he had no family left the tall argonian pondered for a moment and said he did now. For the next 13 years he trained and liberated fellow ARGONIANS from the clutches of the dark elven slavers. When he was 18 years the group was going to go for a big raid on a slave camp deep into the heart of morrowwind. They hid in the hills and when they were making there strike a dark elven battle mage saw them and sent a fire ball hurtling into the group.suddenly a hord of elven arrows flew into the rest of the group the insurgent dived out of the way he turned back and saw his adoptive father dying.he ran over to him and with his last breath he said "free them" and died.the grip around his spear loosened and the insurgent understood. He picked up the spear and ran to the hills.he spent the night planning.in the morning the insurgent snuck into the camp and released the ARGONIANS and they ran to black marsh. The insurgent had heard of the stormcloak rebellion in skyrim the insurgent decided to ask for help of the stormcloak to help in the fight against the dark elves.as he was crossing the border the imperials assumed he was a scavenger and loaded him onto the carts with the stormcloaks. And now your adventure begins
*DISCLAIMER* non of these artworks and images are owned or made by myself these are images I found on Google although the first drawing "Dindale" is my own drawing
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Hey Rojer. Youve got an interesting build there, one that I feel could shine with some polish.
Right away I would suggest adding a picture or two to not only break up long chunks of text but also give us a visual impression of what your character is like.
Do avoid bolding all of your text. If you’re going to bold anything it’s best saved for important details about your build you’d like your readers to pick out more easily.
Oh I must have accidentally pressed bold crap
I use PlayStation so I can't get screenshots off of it
I'll keep that in mind and look to see if I can get it off of there
You don’t necessarily have to use in game screenshots. Any piece of artwork off a google search that captures the look and feel of your character works fine.
Okay well my profile picture is a art piece of mine which is this build so I guess I'll use this
You make your own character art too? Thats pretty neat.
Thanks
I made those edits you suggested is this a more suitable format
That is noticeably better. Great job!
That is noticeably better. Great job!
Hey, I love argonian builds! I think you can use some bullets to clarify the quest and you could try to line up everything.
Curse already mentioned the bold font so I'll check it again later
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