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 BOOK ONE --- GATHERING CLOUDSChapter One                   Lightning rent the sky in two as the blizzard raged. Winter storms and freezing rain were a common occurrence all throughout the year in Skyrim, but thundersnow was rare. The storm had blow…
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The Sunflower Manual replied to The Long-Chapper's discussion Straag Rod: Book 1, Part1, Chapter 3 in The Story Corner
"To heck with numerically symbolic chapters! This was awesome! I was rooting for Alduin in the same way you root for anyone, hero or villain, on a rampage in the beginning. Sheer power and destruction and a little kid crying in the middle of the chao…"
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The Sunflower Manual liked The Long-Chapper's discussion Straag Rod: Book 1, Part1, Chapter 3 in The Story Corner
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The Sunflower Manual liked The Long-Chapper's discussion Straag Rod: Book 1, Part 1, Chapter 2 in The Story Corner
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The Sunflower Manual replied to Chris Diokno's discussion Skytales Event: A Blade Unforged, A Samurai's Tale in The Story Corner
"Nice work! I think this is the first time I've read anything of yours. I liked the things you took from Japanese history and mythology for this; it worked for a story that was this short when it might have been jarring in a longer continuous work wh…"
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The Sunflower Manual liked Chris Diokno's discussion Skytales Event: A Blade Unforged, A Samurai's Tale in The Story Corner
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The Sunflower Manual replied to Ponty's discussion Lamp Chronicle: Teldryn in The Story Corner
"Wow, the sense of history between these two is amazing! And there's more of this? I need to check this out. I'm very curious about the backstory and other plot details you've referenced throughout this piece. Your writing style is great too; there's…"
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The Sunflower Manual liked Ponty's discussion Lamp Chronicle: Teldryn in The Story Corner
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The Sunflower Manual replied to Furrion 17's discussion Joramund III – Siege in The Story Corner
"Wow, the quality of your writing really went up in the half year between this chapter and the last one. Everything is even more vivid and the imagery is superb. I liked how Joramund's back story is fleshed out more too. And I loved the corpse siege…"
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The Sunflower Manual liked Furrion 17's discussion Joramund III – Siege in The Story Corner
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The Sunflower Manual replied to Furrion 17's discussion Story of the Rider: Joramund II - The Lady in Black in The Story Corner
"Well! Tension! A particular kind of tension at that!This Ceryse is a build character of yours? It's always more interesting the more original characters a writer puts into a story. I like it! I also like that Joramund doesn't just shake off the vamp…"
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The Sunflower Manual liked Furrion 17's discussion Story of the Rider: Joramund II - The Lady in Black in The Story Corner
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The Sunflower Manual replied to Furrion 17's discussion Story of the Rider: Joramund I - Blood and Gold in The Story Corner
"Starting off my story corner binge with this! Something light and digestible is perfect right now and this seems really promising; I like the gritty voices you've established for each character, even the insignificant ones. Really fleshes out the en…"
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The Sunflower Manual liked Furrion 17's discussion Story of the Rider: Joramund I - Blood and Gold in The Story Corner
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The Sunflower Manual replied to The Sunflower Manual's discussion All Quiet on the Imperial Waterfront in The Story Corner
"Thanks for the support and encouragement! This is a piece I wrote a while ago and I'm glad it still holds up. I'm in the middle of revising a lot of my work and I'll be posting quite a bit on the site in the near future. I'll be looking forward to y…"
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