The Sunflower Manual replied to Ponty's discussion Lamp Descendant: Epilogue in The Story Corner
"Epilogue to the prologue, classic, also-is that a JoJo reference?!"
Sep 7
The Sunflower Manual liked Ponty's discussion Lamp Descendant: Epilogue in The Story Corner
Sep 7
The Sunflower Manual replied to Ponty's discussion Lamp Descendant: Chapter 4 in The Story Corner
"Textbook boiling point climax right here! I liked that you resolved mostly all of the plot points here. It was a good idea to do this in a short burst and leave yourself with fewer story threads to weave, keeping the overall narrative manageable.…"
Sep 7
The Sunflower Manual liked Ponty's discussion Lamp Descendant: Chapter 4 in The Story Corner
Sep 7
The Sunflower Manual replied to Ponty's discussion Lamp Descendant: Chapter 3 in The Story Corner
"The tried-and-true motions of a good story arc are followed here, and it's a very well-executed buildup to the finale. The reader is left wanting to see who made it and what plan the characters came up with, and there's been just enough investment…"
Sep 7
The Sunflower Manual liked Ponty's discussion Lamp Descendant: Chapter 3 in The Story Corner
Sep 7
The Sunflower Manual liked Ponty's discussion Lamp Descendant: Chapter 2 in The Story Corner
Sep 7
The Sunflower Manual replied to Ponty's discussion Lamp Descendant: Chapter 2 in The Story Corner
" Loving this portrayal of High Rock politics! I like to spend some time there myself, but not from the same perspective. The flashback also gave the perspective character some depth that was missing in the first chapter."
Sep 7
The Sunflower Manual replied to Ponty's discussion Lamp Descendant: Chapter 1 in The Story Corner
"Reading this now that I have some free time. So that's what the Lamp Knights got up to before they had to deal with mask cults and cabbages, hmm (another cult lol)? The fight scenes were clean and occupied physical space, which I liked. The way you…"
Sep 7
The Sunflower Manual liked Ponty's discussion Lamp Descendant: Chapter 1 in The Story Corner
Sep 7
The Sunflower Manual replied to The Long-Chapper's discussion Straag Rod: Book 1, Part 1, Chapter 8 in The Story Corner
"Like I said when I read the draft, I really liked the new complexity this gives to Vingalmo both in the context of the past narrative and the present-time narrative. Always a new layer to their hate when the…"
Sep 7
The Sunflower Manual liked The Long-Chapper's discussion Straag Rod: Book 1, Part 1, Chapter 8 in The Story Corner
Sep 7
The Sunflower Manual replied to The Sunflower Manual's discussion Enlightened Seventh Era Conversation in The Story Corner
"Yes maam~!"
Aug 7
The Sunflower Manual posted a discussion in The Story Corner
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The Sunflower Manual liked The Long-Chapper's discussion Straag Rod: Book 1, Part 1, Chapter 7 in The Story Corner
Aug 5
The Sunflower Manual replied to The Long-Chapper's discussion Straag Rod: Book 1, Part 1, Chapter 7 in The Story Corner
"Okay, woah, the imagery in the beginning was nuuuts, and still so rich and laden with the iconography of Straag! The importance of Crystal-Like-Law comes through much better in this iteration of the story, just from the much more polished language…"
Aug 5
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