"This is exact. Even those of us who've been at it for ages start somewhere.. I would recommend yes, looking at other builds, as well as, for instance, shortening the backstory. Or seperating it throughout the build"
"Hey there Khajiit, welcome back. So, for the build. I would recommend, unless this is a WiP, to include gameplay, such as how Sauron here deals with his enemies, specific types of enemies, quests, etc. Also, its just Character Build, not Character…"